Writing Tips from Caroline Zancan, author of Local Girls
We know readers tend to be writers too, so we feature writing tips from our authors. Who better to offer advice, insight, and inspiration than the authors you admire? Theyāll answer several questions about their work, share their go-to techniques and more. Now, get writing!Ā
What writing techniques have you found most important or memorable?
The trick that probably has served me more than any other is to always stop and write down a promising idea or line when I think of it no matter what else Iām doing. If Iām on my way out the door or even falling asleep and something good pops into my headāsome missing piece of information or crucial development in the story Iām working on, or perhaps an idea for a new storyāIāll stop and take the time to write it down even if it makes me late or means Iāll be tired in the morning. So many times in the past Iāve thought, Oh, Iāll remember that, or, Oh, Iāll sleep on it and write it down in the morning, but then when I return to it itās gone. So now I always make a note of any idea, even if itās just an indirect reference or a half-baked thought. So many projects that Iāve gone on to develop or see all the way through came from a scribble in a margin of a book or a text I sent myself at two in the morning.
Is there something you do to get into a writing mood? Somewhere you go or something you do to get thinking?
Reading great books always inspires me. Thereās nothing like turning the last page of an incredibly satisfying story and just kind of letting the feeling it left you with soak in. Once Iām done processing that feeling, Iām almost always, like, I want to do that. I want to leave someone feeling that way. Even if the book is very different than my own work.
Whatās the best piece of advice you have received?
At Bennington College, where I studied for my MFA, professors often encouraged us to focus not on publishing our work but on getting it as good as it could possibly be. To focus on what was on the page and not who was going to read it or in what format. At the time, I was frustrated by that. I thought, I didnāt come here to journalāI want to write for readers, but now I see the wisdom in that advice. Once something is published, itās out there forever and your name will always be attached to it. I look back at stories I wrote in college, and even in my twenties, and I thank God no one is going to read them. Thereās no rush to get published. And the reading public has no expiration date. Just write, and polish what you have written until itās as good as it can be, and then worry about everything else.
What clichƩs or bad habits would you tell aspiring writers to avoid? Do you still experience them yourself?
I have a list of things I try to avoid, but clichĆ©s, verbs of utterance, and exclamation points are right up there. A few of each inevitably sneak into my work, especially in the first draft, but I do try to troll for them in the revisions that follow. Iāll give myself a few exclamation points for every hundred pages or so, but verbs of utterance I try to keep out altogether. As one professor at Bennington told me, āāF*** you!ā he shouted angrily,ā is redundant. Itās clear from what the speaker is saying that heās angry. Let the words speak for themselves. If the line is really strong, āhe saidā should suffice.
Do you ever base characters off people you know? Why or why not?
I definitely pull individual characteristicsāsayings, speech patterns, mannerisms, quirksāfrom people I know, but itās rare that any given person is the perfect complex combination of factors for the story I want to tell. And there just arenāt that many people I know as well as I know my characters. To write convincing characters, you need to know things about them that arenāt even on the page. You need to be keyed into how they would react to a given situation, what motivates them in that context, and the gap between what they say about it and how they actually feelāeven if theyāre not aware of the disparity. You need to get inside their heads in a way I donāt think we often do with people in our own lives. We approach people we know from our own perspectives, not theirs. Of course, by borrowing an isolated characteristic from someone you know and endowing your character with it, thereās the danger that the person you borrowed it from thinking the entire character is based on her. Itās, like, yes, you both wear yellow nail polish, but, no, I donāt think you secretly hate your mother!
Read more about Local Girls here.